ZachPayne's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-MiBi!- hyper heart v2]

pretty nice

I like this one, it's fairly energetic! Could use a better melody though IMO. Instrument choice in this was also really nice. :)

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

im new to this so melodys are still kinda ya XD
i tend to cram lots of sounds together :)
i like it :D and everyone els dose!
thanks for ur time ^.^

[-MiB!- please tease:D (w.]

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Blending definitely needs some work throughout the song. And for a good strong bass I suggest downloading "Vengeance Essential Club sounds" pack if you don't have it, it's very useful and can make your songs sound way better. Just search through the many drum sounds to find a bass drum that fits your needs!

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

i will give it alook!
bleendings hard with a cheep pos laptop .
but it will get better :)
there is brakes in there that seems pointless and make everythting seem off im looking for some random vocs and stuff to fill thos spots.
the real lead near the end has been killing me to blend but i dont wanna take it out
alot of efects need tuneing!
:0 but thanks for you time kind sir ^.^

[-MiB!- N,D party.]

Cool

Not bad. Though I don't really like the choice of synth for the melody. As said below, the bass could use some work. It's not great by any means, it sounds kind of empty, maybe add at least one extra synth to fix that. Keep it up though!

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

lol this is just a d preset so far befor i call it done there will be atleast 3
lol. some of the bass probs have been fixed as for the kick i dont wanna change it to much cos i dont understand what im doing fully yet
dont worry this isent close to being done :)

[Welcome Back [Trance]]

Really nice

Really really nice sound. I liked the synthwork you used. The DnB beat going on in the background fit nicely with it too. Great job dude :D .

Or4nges responds:

Thanks, brah :D

[Not Quite Poetry]

HELL YEAH

SHITS BUMPIN!

Or4nges responds:

bahaha \m/

[-MiB!-static flake v2]

good track

This is good man. It sounds decent and everything, the only thing I'll complain about is that the main melody sounded sort of "cheesy" after a while. Keep working at it!

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

ya the lead has been bugging me ive been trying to change it but i keep getting back to blanks or get distracted with fixing something els x.x
im trying to fix the basses distortion on the song still i cant seem to get it fixedXD but melody and lead should be changed sometime XD thanks for the review!
-MiB!-
happy holidays
and if ur looking for more hardcore songs check out my past work:D