ZachPayne's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gravity Hammer - Full Moon]

potential

Song has good potential. You definitely have the feeling of the earth spinning while staring up at the moon. But you should add to it, I tihnk this could be an amazing track if you elaborate a lot on it! It's pretty repetitive otherwise.

[deep space foundation]

advice

I'll try to write as helpful a review as possible. Well, the reason I gave it a bad score was that is wasn't really much at all. I mean unless I'm missing something, it was just a synth going with a simple chord progression for a minute, then a guitar (I think that's what it was) comes in and plays a two-note riff for the rest of the track.

Try adding more complexity to the music. Add maybe a few more synths with different and more complex parts. Also try experimenting with the guitar riff. Depending on how good you are with the guitar, make a more complex, interesting riff. Otherwise everything just gets too boring. I'm assuming this is your first time trying anything like this? If it is, DO NOT GIVE UP! Just because you make one dud doesn't mean you won't get better =] . And have fun with it too. Just try experimenting on your own time and even if it sounds cheesy or dumb at first, just try changing it up and working on it and you could have something cool.

Hope I helped a little. Like I said, just keep at it. Hope to hear something cool from you in the future ;] .

[First Go]

Not bad

Not bad for a first! Obviously you know somewhat of what you're doing. I think if you worked and practiced/experimented more with this, you'd have a pretty decent track on your hands! Great job for a first. Not amazing, but far from bad. Very nice, keep it up =] .

[Cold Days (edit)]

cool

It's a really enjoyable song. I like the intro synths, just sound cool. The song is sort of repetitive at times though. There's not really anything catchy for me to remember either. But that's just my opinion! It was a really nice listen! Great job, keep it up!